No, your eyes are not playing tricks on you

Part 2 of Chapter 20 was up (briefly) this morning, but I hated it so much that I had to take it down for re-working.  I’m going to try to have it back up this evening.  The 39 people who did get to read it, I’m sorry for playing with your heads – but I am never (ever) satisfied with my endings, not until they’ve been picked over within an inch of its life.

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12 thoughts on “No, your eyes are not playing tricks on you

    • You didn’t miss anything. It was wordy and stupid. I have no idea what’s wrong with me this week. I can not close the deal. 😦

  1. I find that what has to be wrestled, tussled and tortured about is always much better in the end 🙂

    • Truer words have never been spoken. I am endeavoring to my it palatable for you all. As it currently stands, it’s grade A crap!

  2. evil, evil, evil…

    I’m thrilled that you brought Amanda back, btw. 🙂
    And also, I’m on pins and needles waiting for the meeting at the embassy to happen.

    • In a way, after all the work I’ve had to do to re-write the story, I’m thinking that perhaps I should have left her on Vulcan.

  3. Happy birthday to you
    Happy birthday to you
    Happy birthday dear Teresa,
    Happy birthday to you
    and many more!!!!!!!

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